Rejectee Therapy for Friendship is the Best Ship
Started by Willa Song on Jul 27, 2014
  • Thanks David for the constructive feedback! Good to know. We'll keep trying!
    Aug 06, 2014 at 3:12pm
  • Okay, that worked.

    I remember this one! Your cast is awesome and this looked great. I love that dude who comes to the door. He's great.

    I guess the main reason this didn't get into the screening is that it is pretty stagnant. You never leave that apartment. There are three scenes. Watching it I feel kind of held prisoner in that doorway scene where three characters are talking.

    I also don't totally understand what anyone wants, and everyone is being real cartoony and silly. They need to make rent and then they want to find a fat guy, and then a skinny guy comes to the door and then they eat candy and are bummed when the skinny guy wants to leave?

    Also, I don't know what you really gain from having your characters talk in spanish. I get that maybe you're trying to do a spanish soap opera thing, but none of this looks like a spanish soap opera and the storyline is nothing like a spanish soap opera. It's shot like a web series.

    My advice for Channel 101 success is to shake off all that bad "web series" mojo and make a mini-TV show. Have your characters get out of that apartment and go on a real adventure. Keep it moving.
    Jul 31, 2014 at 1:09pm
  • Hmmm.. try this one?
    Jul 29, 2014 at 3:23pm
  • I could be mistaken, but I think this link is busted. It seems to be taking me to my "my videos" page on my own YouTube account. It could just be me, but it looks like your URL is a little different from the standard YouTube link URL.
    Jul 28, 2014 at 7:38am
    Jul 27, 2014 at 10:34pm
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