Rejectee Therapy for COMMONPLACE
Started by Jason Moran on Mar 26, 2014
  • I think you guys need to get out of that room.
    This plays like a series of vignettes, rather than a full story which is what 101 audiences usually look for.

    Try taking your main character and have him go off on a quest of sorts that he or she wouldn't expect to go on. Show them struggle to overcome one *large* obstacle instead of a series of small delaying actions.

    Translated that means-- elevator waiting; bad. getting out to the world; good.

    keep making and submitting!
    Mar 31, 2014 at 10:15pm
  • So what did you guys think? http://youtu.be/0YSPwvkWXQk
    Mar 26, 2014 at 1:47pm
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