Technically, the audio was all over the place which made it hard to follow at the panel. I rewatched it wih headphones on and genuinely laughed a number of times.

It had a strange, fun energy that just need to be streamlined and reigned in a bit.

This followed the old Harmon story circle pretty nicely. That certainly helped.

Watching this a second time, it would have helped to make clearer why the character wants his parents to break up in the first place. Is he a dick or a normal kid?

Thanks so much!

I agree that the joke was in poor taste and certainly not meant to be at the expense of the mentally handi-capped.

Any further feed back is greatly appreciated.

This was strange and funny -- it was definitely considered.

It was just a little too confusing, especially the sabotaging sequence -- everything would have been clearer if you had set up the father's obsession with the tv remote, and the wife's cleanliness in the beginning.

Also, the "retard date tion" joke was kind of a bummer.

Please keep submitting, it made me laugh a lot.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tcThii9ZTWE


Any feed back would be great. We're big fans. This was our first attempt at Harmon's structure and we are aware that it is missing the final step.

Thanks guys!