Rejectee Therapy for Norman and Peter: Bruce Willis' Personal Assistants
Started by MC Griffin on May 29, 2012
  • This show looks awesome its clear you guys are great film maker. that being said It would help if you define your characters personality, wants and goals. Make an interesting character and then put them in interesting situations you want to see. You are putting the cart before the horse when you come up with a funny premise and then fill the world with blank characters.
    Jun 06, 2012 at 7:20pm
  • You guys are very close. You're absolutely there on the technical side. The pop culture references did seem forced. Don't get me wrong, there's definitely room for that kind of stuff at Channel 101. But the shows that work best are the ones that can integrate those references into a larger story/concept instead of using them as the main crux of the show. I have a feeling we'll see you guys in the screening soon. Keep it up!
    Jun 04, 2012 at 3:51pm
  • Very, very impressive technical work on this show! You guys are great filmmakers. But I agree with Wysol. The "here's a bunch of Die Hard references" bit was a little hokey. But it's great filmmaking and a style that lends itself very well to the big screen. Keep at it!
    May 30, 2012 at 4:42pm
  • I can't say why this was rejected, but I think you guys have heaps of promise. I liked the energy, and thought the trail of guns was funny. Acting was great. Maybe some of the pop culture jokes regarding Bruce didn't work that well on me. The core premise was probably the weakest element. Hope to see more from you!
    May 29, 2012 at 4:07pm
  • Not my show, but a friend of a friend submitted it, and I don't think he even knows if it got to you guys, let alone if it got rejected. If it did, why?
    May 29, 2012 at 12:51am
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