Rejectee Therapy for Cop Rock: A Tribute
Started by Zane LaRue on Oct 27, 2013
  • Thanks so much for the feedback, it makes a lot of sense. Thank you for the link as well. I went to your advice thread and found the acceptable tv tutorials which I haven't seen since high school. Thanks, man!
    Oct 31, 2013 at 9:33am
  • I wasn't at the panel meeting, but this is my two cents:

    You're funny and it looks like you have the means to make a great comedy 101 pilot, but you didn't live up to the "Cop Rock" idea. I didn't know what your show was about until Josh Fadem showed up.

    Your show should get to the conflict/premise/core (i.e. the story) within the first 45 seconds. You guys just kinda grazed the beginning of a story. It seems like an excuse to make a comedy music video, which isn't a show.

    Make more! And check out the 101 storytelling tutorials from way back when: http://channel101.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Tutorials
    Oct 27, 2013 at 10:14pm
  • Totally posted the wrong link... That was not my submission. Here is the link to Cop Rock:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHiIH2AisPU
    Oct 27, 2013 at 3:31pm
  • http://youtu.be/KKEyQij0hYI

    Technically my second channel 101 submission (I submitted once from Oklahoma in 2010). I would love some feed back, so I can suck less next time. Thanks for watching!
    Oct 27, 2013 at 3:30pm
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