Rejectee Therapy for Bathroom
Started by Ariel Gardner on May 23, 2012
  • Once again, a really well-made show from you guys. I think part of the reason it didn't hit as well as it could have was that it required a very specific knowledge of the subject matter. Not only did you have to remember "Ally McBeal," but you had to remember the unisex bathroom part, the dancing, the casting.

    I think it might have worked better if you'd broadened your scope a little bit. The bathroom could still play, but what's the rest of the office like? What are the people like outside of the bathroom?

    That being said, this was still a good submission, especially considering that it's only your second one. Please keep going - can't wait to see what you do next!
    May 24, 2012 at 5:13pm
  • sorry, here's the real link.
    May 24, 2012 at 12:53am

    Let's talk about it.
    May 23, 2012 at 11:11am
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