Once again, a really well-made show from you guys. I think part of the reason it didn't hit as well as it could have was that it required a very specific knowledge of the subject matter. Not only did you have to remember "Ally McBeal," but you had to remember the unisex bathroom part, the dancing, the casting.
I think it might have worked better if you'd broadened your scope a little bit. The bathroom could still play, but what's the rest of the office like? What are the people like outside of the bathroom?
That being said, this was still a good submission, especially considering that it's only your second one. Please keep going - can't wait to see what you do next!
I think it might have worked better if you'd broadened your scope a little bit. The bathroom could still play, but what's the rest of the office like? What are the people like outside of the bathroom?
That being said, this was still a good submission, especially considering that it's only your second one. Please keep going - can't wait to see what you do next!
Let's talk about it.