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Hey Phil, I was on the panel and we liked your animation. It was definitely on the board as a possibility for the show this month. The style had a great look.

The only thing kind of holding it back was the longer pace and being stuck in a single scene for the duration of the episode. A lot of times moving to different locations/scenes every minute or so will help make things feel like their moving and keep the energy up.

Also in general, 101 pilots tend to do best when they are telling a full story and showcase a clear format for what we’ll see in a potential next episode. Anything that helps your work play like a 5 minute version of full TV episode.

Whatever you do- keep submitting!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7qtFZ8-rxqE