The edits you made really improved it! The joke became way clearer and stronger but I personally would like to have more content within. More jokes, more story, more character, and somewhere for it to go. It was difficult to see what this would look like as a continuing series. Keep it up!
Loved the new version! Much improved. It got some votes and was definitely in the running. I think ultimately it was still a little too static, although well shot with lots of cool angles too. But I personally really dug it!
I had submitted it last month, and between now and then I cut out about 2 minutes (there was like a long intro & outro with walking through the desert that had no dialogue)
Yeah, so what did people think? Please let me know why it didn't make the cut! Thanks!
Feb 27, 2020 at 7:02pm
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In terms of a continuing series, it’s going to be an anthology, with each episode as a different bible-y encounter
I had submitted it last month, and between now and then I cut out about 2 minutes (there was like a long intro & outro with walking through the desert that had no dialogue)
Yeah, so what did people think? Please let me know why it didn't make the cut! Thanks!