Rejectee Therapy for Feedback on "Comedy Cops"
Started by Ryan Pavey on Feb 27, 2020
  • I can't speak for the panel, but I can say that this specific type of satire is a really fine line to walk. The self-promotion at the end probably didn't help, either.

    Watching it, it felt kind of like being talked down to, and while there were several funny lines throughout, the execution of the premise never really transcended that which it was explicitly criticizing.

    The performances were good and I could definitely see a version of this premise playing; maybe sharpen the timing and remove the self-promotions. Being meta works, but the tone used here in labeling subjective comedy 'bad' can be alienating for audiences.

    Keep making stuff!
    Mar 08, 2020 at 8:56am
  • I'd love to hear peoples thoughts and how to improve for future submissions!
    Mar 05, 2020 at 3:47pm
  • Thanks for checking out! https://youtu.be/elfoRZIWxPk
    Feb 27, 2020 at 3:03pm
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