Rejectee Therapy for Feedback for "Secrets of the Flex"
Started by Jonathan Williams on Jan 26, 2020
  • Matt Hill says:
    This was super funny and the animation was hilarious. Would have loved to see the character go through a story and have it be less of a sketch. But it was still really funny and probably would have screened in a less competitive month.
    Jan 28, 2020 at 10:16pm
  • HA! this felt like the computer animated version of brave encounters episode 1.

    You have great animation and voice acting.

    Writing wise I would like to see some conflict introduced. If this character is delusional then somehow expose that to him or challenge that. Even if it's a battle within his own mind. If he is right about his thoughts then introduce someone with opposing thoughts.
    Jan 27, 2020 at 10:40am

    Hey everyone, would love to hear what you thought of Secrets of the Flex. It was something a friend and I came up with and realized we could actually create. Any comments or criticisms are welcomed!
    Jan 26, 2020 at 3:31am
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