Rejectee Therapy for Feedback for “The First Jewish _____”
Started by Brett Maline on Jul 25, 2019
  • please make more stuff. This show looked gorgeous and I think you have a lot of great potential.
    Aug 07, 2019 at 6:56am
  • Matt Hill says:
    I really liked this a lot. Ultimately the panel as a whole felt like the story wasn't quite strong enough to really sell it. It goes down some funny tangents (the legos, the intervention), but in a 5 minute show you really want to focus in. If this guy isn't a surfer why is he pretending and where does that lead. But man... really funny, I really dug it.
    Jul 25, 2019 at 8:14pm
  • fisrt of:
    -great quality, lots of effort
    -funny concept
    -some great jokes

    -the concept wares out fast (over the course of an episode and the rest of teh episodes)
    -personally wouldn't mind a higher concentration of jokes and maybe some more clever ones

    this advice is just personal for me, channel 101 seems to like more awkward, worn out humor like 'bachelor but with dads', i mean its a great snl sketch but it lacks quite a few things
    Jul 25, 2019 at 8:12pm
  • CORRECT LINK! So sorry.
    Jul 25, 2019 at 7:49pm
  • First time submitting to Channel 101, would love to get some feedback, would love to be a part of the Channel 101 community. Thank you!
    Jul 25, 2019 at 7:41pm
    Jul 25, 2019 at 7:38pm
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