Rejectee Therapy for Feedback for "Detective Punch" - Rejected Pilot
Started by Zach Dahm on Apr 24, 2019
  • Zach Dahm says:
    Hi Chase!
    Thank you for the great feedback! It is very much appreciated. We will definitely keep this all in mind when working on future pilots. We ain't done yet...
    -Zach
    May 09, 2019 at 4:55am
  • Hey Zach!
    So, I think the biggest issue here is clarity. Specifically in the audio--Detective Punch's voice is very fast-paced and hard to understand (especially when the audio quality isn't top-notch). Not saying the answer is to go out and buy new mics, just make sure the audience can understand the lines.
    That being said, this was definitely a pilot we talked about. There were some funny moments and the structure would be followable if the lines weren't given so fast. And as much as I found the tempo of the main character funny, when he's the one telling us what's going on and we can't hear him, all that kinda goes out the window.
    All things considered, this was made well. Hope you guys keep submitting!
    -Chase
    Apr 30, 2019 at 5:26pm
  • Zach Dahm says:
    We would appreciate any feedback/ critique for our pilot! Here's a link:

    https://youtu.be/Bgqnf5-pP08
    Apr 24, 2019 at 8:45pm
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