Rejectee Therapy for Feedback for "5 Min. Recipes For the College Dorm Life"
Started by Diego Barrera on Apr 24, 2019
  • Hey, Diego!

    Thanks for submitting last month! Not sure how everyone else at panel felt, so I speak for myself, but in general the funny moments in this weren't landing for me. I had a hard time feeling engaged with the scene or the character. Picking up the pace could help. Better audio quality would definitely help. But probably more important would be having some sort of through line, like a story or an arc for the character. I understand this was more a single scene bit, but having more happen would make it feel more like a show. Just something to keep in mind if your submitting in the future. Which I think you should!

    Chad
    May 14, 2019 at 7:27pm
  • Hey everyone!
    I'm looking for some feedback for our short "5 Min. Recipes For The College Dorm Life." Thanks for watching!

    https://youtu.be/jWvFiTrRcAo
    Apr 24, 2019 at 5:49pm
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