Rejectee Therapy for Feedback for Salt Lake 2003: It's not delivery it's inferno.
Started by John Leonard on Mar 27, 2019
  • Thank you for the feedback Chase! I will give that some thought with the next one I'm working on. I see what you're saying. The show from my perspective is about people who aren't motivated. But I also want it to be entertaining. So I will watch that episode again and think about that critique and see how I can improve going forward. Thanks again!
    Mar 28, 2019 at 6:20pm
  • Hi John!
    So one thing I notice watching this episode is that none of the characters really want anything. Having passive main characters usually results in an arc that isn't clearly defined, or just isn't that interesting to begin with. That being said, there's nothing wrong in keeping things low-stakes, the characters just need to not know/not understand that.
    Hope you keep submitting!
    -Chase
    Mar 28, 2019 at 4:42pm
  • I know I've submitted various episodes of this show but I always figure it never hurts to try. Thanks again for watching and the feedback!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vv40sFoNf4&t
    Mar 27, 2019 at 5:10pm
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