Rejectee Therapy for Feedback for "Walter Kidney's Magical World of Kidney"
Started by ash sengstaken on Mar 27, 2019
  • Hi Chase/Adam!

    Thank you so much!! That completely makes sense, I see the thinness of it. I didn't use a mic, just my basic camcorder and phone since I decided to kinda crank it out last minute (bad call for sure!). I'm making a new thing this month that will hopefully include some form of a storyline and basic production value. Woohoo! Learning! Thanks again for the feedback, I really appreciate it!!
    Apr 07, 2019 at 1:50am
  • Hey Ash!
    So Adam pretty much hit all the points I would have to say about this. The only real reason I'm commenting is to say that I liked it and hope you keep submitting. twothumbsup,noneonthespacebar
    -Chase
    Mar 29, 2019 at 5:00pm
  • I was excited to watch this one since I'm sorta a sucker for anything remotely Disney. I definitely thought this had its charms (the performances, the tone) but I think it's ultimately a little thin. I know we live in a post-Poolside Chat world at Channel 101 now but I think you'll have greater creative success if you try to tell a story with your characters instead of just one scene with them talking/fighting.

    Having said that, I think the most immediately pressing issue is the sound. The audio quality is pretty low and it'd be rough for that to play in a movie theater. Did you use any mics?

    Thanks for submitting though! I hope you make something new soon!!
    Mar 28, 2019 at 3:10pm
  • If I could get some feedback on this, it would be great! I'm trying to improve!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2qGZlYpW9vk&t=4s
    Mar 27, 2019 at 3:46pm
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