Rejectee Therapy for The Detective In The City
Started by Jeremiah Stallings on Jan 28, 2019
  • Hey, Jeremiah!

    I thought your submission was great! I loved when it went into the poster and into a new world. It had a really fun style, and I was interested to see where it was going.

    But I think it slowed down after it stayed at the desk scene for awhile without much happening or progressing. It started to drag a little for me. Maybe having more scenes or changing locations would help keep the pace up and make it feel fuller.

    This is unrelated to the content of the video, but I see this submission is Part 6 of a series and already has 11,000 views. Channel 101 tends to like new submissions that were created for Channel 101 and not posted publicly beforehand/elsewhere, as well as pilots that are no more than 5 minutes.

    Overall I thought it was a good submission. It was clear that you put a lot of work into it, and it showed in a lot of ways. Keep submitting!
    Jan 29, 2019 at 10:52pm
  • Channel 101 is awesome. We definitely want to be a part of this. Can we get any feedback for our failed video?
    Jan 28, 2019 at 1:44am
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