Rejectee Therapy for Feedback on "Dear John"
Started by Brendan Sargent on Jan 24, 2019
  • Hey!

    I think adding music and sound effects would really help the energy.

    It also should be noted that there were a few shows about people's apartments this month that really crowded the scene and hit a lot of the same types of jokes (I remember multiple bathroom scenes, for instance).

    Jan 25, 2019 at 7:09pm
  • Improvised webseries - like Cribs, but for bathrooms.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kUNUd5S2fd8&t=101s

    Do you think this is funny? / What could be added or taken away to improve?

    Thanks!

    Jan 24, 2019 at 6:00pm
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