Rejectee Therapy for Feedback for "Oh no, am I...dumb?"
Started by Matthew Fichandler on Jan 24, 2019
  • Hey Mathew!

    Was definitely a fun pilot with some solid jokes.

    However, I had a hard time getting investing in the characters/ their relationships since they were played as such heightened (Somewhat predictable) versions of smart/dumb.

    Though, them being played this way led to some solid jokes (milk in cabinet, solve for x for room #, looking for phone bit) it also led to some that fell flat because it felt predictable.

    Hope you keep submitting!
    Jan 29, 2019 at 12:41am
  • Would love to hear what to improve on!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSB3l6PeL54
    Jan 24, 2019 at 8:17am
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