Rejectee Therapy for Feedback for pilot "Hungry Baby"
Started by Will Dove on Oct 25, 2018
  • Hey Will,

    Thanks for submitting. I mostly agree with Andy. The first scene was a really fun tone and set it up nicely. And while I like the dynamic of the two guys and the jokes in the rest (especially the reveal of what the book was), it just stayed too stagnant for me. Felt like a set up of a story vs a full story (like him tracking down the book and getting it back to her or whatever).

    Still a fun show and was in consideration. Hope you keep submitting.
    Oct 27, 2018 at 7:56pm
  • Will Dove says:
    Hey Andy!

    Thanks for getting back to me! Yea definitely needed an ND filter there for the last scene on the balcony. You're right, someone else noted it hangs too much there at the end. Thanks again for typing all that up!
    Oct 25, 2018 at 10:14pm
  • Hi Will,

    I was new to the panel this month and have been rejected several times, so please take this with a grain of salt. I think I speak for everyone when I say that we all loved it -- very strong beginning, hilarious when the girl sucks the guy's nipple. And great scene afterward. Great performances and music cues. The feeling was that it kind of petered out toward the end -- we wished more had happened. And the shot with the sun on the balcony was jarring. But it was definitely one of everyone's favorites, for sure. We were definitely laughing. I hope this helps!
    Oct 25, 2018 at 9:55pm
  • Will Dove says:
    Looking for feedback on this pilot! Don't hold back!
    Oct 25, 2018 at 9:12pm
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