The animation is fun and you clearly have a grasp on how to tell a story. I can't speak for the rest of the panel but, for me, the comedy didn't land at all. I don't believe any comedy is off-limits but if you're going to make rape jokes -- prison rape included -- the punchline shouldn't just be "ha ha he still gets raped".
The animation is fun and you clearly have a grasp on how to tell a story. I can't speak for the rest of the panel but, for me, the comedy didn't land at all. I don't believe any comedy is off-limits but if you're going to make rape jokes -- prison rape included -- the punchline shouldn't just be "ha ha he still gets raped".
Keep making stuff and submitting!
Be gentle.