Rejectee Therapy for "God and Joe" rejected pilot. Would love some feedback. Thank y
Started by Robert Greeson on Oct 17, 2018
  • Hey, there's a lot of fun stuff in here.

    I think this felt more like introducing the three characters rather than telling a full story. I like the ending with bringing the guy back to life and I would've preferred if the show was more like that. For example, you set up the premise that God is real but he's this broey, manchild guy, his ego is so fragile he brings someone back to life to prove himself, and that leads to a problem which leads to another thing, etc etc, etc, and super funny resolution. Without a cause and effect story, the quality of your show rests on how well the bits land and, personally, many didn't land great for me.

    Thanks for submitting and hope you submit more!
    Oct 27, 2018 at 8:35pm
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