Rejectee Therapy for Maineland
Started by Jack de Sanz on Aug 07, 2018
  • Thanks for the feedback dood!
    I think you're totally right about the pace, I was feeling it too--our original cut was about 8.5 minutes, and we had to edit out a lot of stuff including her whole "protagonist in a familiar stasis=death" intro. Breaking it up into two will help with the pace of some jokes as well. Great notes!
    Aug 25, 2018 at 7:29pm
  • KP Parker says:
    Hi Jack!! I wasn't at this panel but was able to see this show at last month's and just rewatched it now.

    I like this show a lot. The characters are really strong and each funny in their own ways. The production is super polished and the editing is clean.

    Ultimately I think this show would benefit from being slowed WAY down. We need to identify with that main character and see a little of her life on its own BEFORE getting tangled in this campaign. I think you have about 2 episodes worth of material in this which makes it hard to keep up as a viewer.

    Also take a look at the story circle by Dan Harmon, I think it's on this site. May help with the overall structure!

    This show/cast/crew is really strong so I hope to see it again or another show from y'all!!
    Aug 24, 2018 at 6:56pm
  • Hey folks, Id love to get some feedback on this if anyone has any!
    Aug 23, 2018 at 7:18am
  • Hey guys,
    First time caller, long time listener here. Here's a link to my first 101 submission, Maineland:

    We were encouraged to submit again, but I would love to get some feedback before then.
    Thanks y'all.
    Aug 07, 2018 at 11:49pm
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