White Guys: PI
on Jul 27, 2018
Oh awesome, glad to hear you went to the screening. My number one recommendation for anyone getting into 101 is to take a deep dive on the website and watch a bunch of old shit. Looking forward to your future submissions.
Aug 02, 2018 at 7:37pm
Thanks Alex, really appreciate the feedback.
Sandi is the best! We were lucky to have her.
That all makes sense and in going to my first screening on Sat night I think I understand the form more than before submitting this one.
We'll definitely be back! Be it trying to recut this one or a new concept.
Aug 01, 2018 at 8:40pm
Hey, there's a lot of fun in here -- great song and stars someone from the fucking WIRE.
I think you hit the nail on the head; this really feels like the first five minutes of a 30 minute thing and not a five minute full stand-alone story. If you wanna set up what the series looks like, that's great, but what really feels great at 101 is telling a full story within the time frame. Also (again, this makes sense viewing this as the opening to a half hour thing) but a minute for opening credits is too crazy long for 101 I think.
Also, this didn't affect the decision, but just fyi, one of the bigger 101 shows of the past few years is Street Cleaning about a meter maid.
I hope you keep submitting!
Aug 01, 2018 at 8:18pm
Hoping we could get some feedback on this pilot.
It is part of a larger 30' pilot that we tried to design to be dissect-able, but my gut tells me we probably weren't able to set up enough story towards the end.
Jul 27, 2018 at 6:26pm
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