Rejectee Therapy for The Chip Files (Rejected Pilot)
Started by Cory Novak on Jul 26, 2018
  • Hey Cory,

    This one kind of confused me a bit. So it's a commercial that is interrupted by some killer and then it's a psa? Maybe it was me but I was having a hard time following what was literally happening. For your next pilot, I would consider telling a simpler narrative story with a clear main character(s).

    Also, I don't think the jokes landed very hard in the panel -- especially not the ethnic stereotype jokes.

    Keep submitting!
    Jul 27, 2018 at 7:38am
  • Bob Stone says:
    hahaha, that went 0 to a 100 real quick. Good stuff!
    Jul 26, 2018 at 7:09pm
  • Would love some constructive criticism here on this rejected pilot.
    Jul 26, 2018 at 8:57am
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