Rejectee Therapy for The Thin Moo Line - Pilot
Started by John Leonard on May 24, 2018
  • Thank you for the response Kyle!
    May 30, 2018 at 4:57pm
  • Great work, John. Love the animation.

    I think you are right that this pilot feels like a short/sketch instead of a true pilot episode of a longer series.

    It's all kind of context building to the one singular joke - that this work accident was obviously a wolf murder all along. It's simple which is good, but would be fun to see more happen.

    I like the idea of a version where the Cow Cops are the true protagonists. Maybe follow them as they respond to a robbery or a disturbance of some type. and hear them talk about their philosophy on being cops in this animal world and interact with different types of animals. Just hearing them talk about their POV as cops has opportunity for some funny/interesting riffs.

    Great work, can't wait to see what you do next.
    May 25, 2018 at 9:30am
  • Here's my pilot. I know it feels more like a short unfortunately. Thought I'd put it up for feedback regardless. Had I done another episode I wanted to have the cops investigate a crime at a shady funeral home run by otters, but alas! Thanks in advance for the feedback, it means a lot!
    May 24, 2018 at 4:21pm
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