Rejectee Therapy for Too Many Cruise (Rejected Pilot)
Started by Zach Dahm on Apr 26, 2018
  • Zach Dahm says:
    Thanks for the feedback! We worked on another edit and re-submitted only to be rejected again, so we decided to move on and make something else. In hindsight, we definitely should have gone back and re-shot the car stuff.

    Here's the second edit:
    May 29, 2018 at 10:44pm
  • I think this could be greatly improved if you guys reshot the car stuff and had better lighting and sound.

    Also work on the delivery of each line, and this could be a really good piece. You can pretty much keep all the other stuff the way it is though!
    May 24, 2018 at 4:57pm
  • Zach Dahm says:
    Close, it's Too Many Zooz (see what we did there)
    Apr 26, 2018 at 5:46am
  • I really enjoyed this, great work. But my real question is, IS THAT MOON HOOCH???
    Apr 26, 2018 at 3:12am
  • Zach Dahm says:
    Yeah, we had a feeling that might be an issue. Lesson learned - give yourself more time in post. Thanks!
    Apr 26, 2018 at 12:53am
  • Hey Zach! I was at the panel last night and I really love your show. It's creative and interesting to watch. My biggest issue with this was the sound editing. I could barely hear any of the dialogue over the loud music track. I think you should make another pass at the sound and resubmit.
    Apr 26, 2018 at 12:34am
  • Zach Dahm says:
    This was our first 101 submission - would appreciate any feedback!
    Apr 26, 2018 at 12:10am
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