Rejectee Therapy for Afterparty Stories [Rejected]
Started by Jeg Jooper on Feb 22, 2018
  • Thank you so much KP! This is a great community. Everyone outside the comic shop is happy and friendly. This was my test visit to see if I wanted to move to LA and itís going great so far! Thank you so much for the feedback. Iím very excited to invest your critiques into my next submission! I can feel myself getting better with eaxh submission.
    Feb 25, 2018 at 6:00am
  • KP Parker says:
    Hi Jeg! This was a HUGE improvement since last month, I thought! Congrats on the hard work! I think this submission felt a bit long which tends to happen when there is a lot of talking and not a lot of visual action. Could have benefited from a more interesting setting or having more dialogue between two people instead of just monologue. Your editing is really strong, there was lots of funny clips and images in there. Overall, I was interested the whole time! Just keep working!
    Feb 23, 2018 at 9:43pm

    Thanks friends!
    Feb 22, 2018 at 10:02pm
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