Rejectee Therapy for Ball or Nothing - February 2018 Rejection
Started by Film Productions Club on Feb 21, 2018
  • Thanks, KP!
    Mar 12, 2018 at 7:11pm
  • KP Parker says:
    Hi Film Productions Club! Really awesome first submission. I agree with Danny, this would benefit from some more quick jokes and faster paced narrative. More things can happen in one episode, don't limit it to just step 1 and 2. I think this could have also gotten a bit more outlandish, maybe gone to some fun training areas, him tossing around things other than basketballs, etc. Just more things to keep interest! Overall, I'm super excited to see more from you guys!
    Mar 01, 2018 at 1:10am
  • Thanks for the feedback, Damian! I skimmed through the other posts and loved Fruit Note - I'll try and find time for an in-depth comment on your post.
    Mar 01, 2018 at 12:43am
  • Hey Film Productions,

    I thought this was really good! The story hooked me in the first 30 seconds, and I was interested the whole way through. I think, for a first attempt, that this was better than most.

    However, it did feel like it was lacking when it came to the number of jokes. You got one chuckle out of me at the beginning, but that was it. I felt like there was opportunities for quick jokes which just passed by, and made the whole thing feel not as tight and well paced as it could be.

    I'd like to see you what you submit next. Take my advice with a grain of salt, as my pilot, Fruit Note, got rejected as well.

    Thanks for sharing.
    Feb 27, 2018 at 11:05pm
  • Hey all,

    This was our first attempt at 101 - we're bummed, but that's the way it goes, and we can't wait to try again!

    Any and all feedback would be absolutely appreciated.

    Film Productions
    Feb 21, 2018 at 3:26pm
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