Rejectee Therapy for Boner History
Started by Andrew Yanker on Jan 28, 2018
  • Thanks Oliver! Being a parody, the impressions were the only way I felt to embody that voice of Drunk History. As for the impressions, I was kind of going for that rough feel, but I understand if you didn't feel it was purposeful enough. The story point is well taken, thanks for the feedback!
    Jan 30, 2018 at 10:51pm
  • Hi Andrew, I think if you're going to rely on impressions then they need to be really on point, these weren't quite so maybe original characters would be easier. Also, have a look at Dan Harmon's story cycle so that in your pilot there's a coherent beginning, middle, and end for the audience to be engaged with.
    Jan 28, 2018 at 9:07am
  • Hey submitted this month. Didn't get in. Would love feedback. Thanks, Andrew
    Jan 28, 2018 at 12:16am
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