Rejectee Therapy for The Gun Show-January 2018 (Rejected)
Started by John Leonard on Jan 25, 2018
  • Thank you so much for the feedback everyone! I can definitely see what you mean about the length and making it more of a show. I'll add more story and more jokes and MORE BEARS. And @timothy obis hit me up on twitter @mcgettigan_
    Jan 28, 2018 at 3:20pm
  • Hi John, I agree with KP in that it wasn't quite long enough to perhaps be considered a pilot, more like a sketch. Also, with these submissions they've got to be really funny so keep the jokes coming constantly. We really like the bears and the idea, so carry on with the concept, just expand it into more of a narrative.
    Jan 28, 2018 at 9:17am
  • I liked it. I think the animation could have been more thorough like the mouths of the bears. Cool concept.I'd like to collaborate with ya!
    Jan 27, 2018 at 9:05am
  • KP Parker says:
    Hi John! I was on the panel this month. Honestly, the biggest thing stopping this from continuing on is it's length. When most of the other submissions have 4-5 minutes of story it's hard for a 1 and a half minute one to hold its own. Keep working and polishing and adding more!
    Jan 26, 2018 at 9:16pm
  • I could use some feedback on my rejected show if anyone's willing. Right now I'm trying to shorten and tighten up all my stuff but obviously still need work. Thanks!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WwmlncY2B2M&t=
    Jan 25, 2018 at 4:15pm
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