Rejectee Therapy for Good Cop Black Cop - Watkins and Johnson ep1
Started by Matthew Haas on Sep 28, 2017
  • This is definitely a sketch and not a show. And, at the risk of coming of like a delicate snowflake, not a particularly funny sketch premise at that.

    I'd say click around the site, see what shows you like, and see how their stories are structured. Reading Harmon's essays on the story circle is always helpful. I'd also recommend maybe watching a youtube video on cinematography. Obviously, 101 shows don't need to be masterfully lit, but you may benefit from some basic framing tip -- you got a lot of heads getting cut off and that's generally distracting.

    Keep on submitting and come to the screenings if you can.
    Sep 28, 2017 at 8:38pm
    Sep 28, 2017 at 3:37pm
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