You grabbed the panel with the good energetic rap at the beginning and then lost us. Too many diversions, and it dropped the energy and focus of the opening rap. Keep your eye on the prize and keep the story moving along. Love that it was told entirely in original music. Excited to see what else you guys come up with next.

Here's the link for my newest rejected pilot. Feedback is appreciated.
https://vimeo.com/43222039