Rejectee Therapy for https://vimeo.com/140096300
Started by Nathan Cowper on Oct 28, 2015
  • Thanks for the response, Alex. I agree about upping the stakes. We've been given a 2nd ep at Channel101ny that is rife with plot twists, so that's something.

    And yeah, I'll keep submitting until I die or until channel 101 dies. Let's hope neither happens soon..
    Nov 01, 2015 at 5:50pm
  • Hi Nathan,

    I like the style and tone of this show a lot. I think it runs out of steam though. It's tough to make something about writers trying to write novels interesting so I think you gotta up some stakes or give us some plot twists or I don't even know what I'm saying. You set up he's a writer who's going to write a novel and then the ending is that he's gonna write a novel.

    I hope you keep submitting stuff. This was definitely one of the better submissions. The toast bit was really good.
    Oct 28, 2015 at 5:08pm
  • This is my pilot Darkville. I'd submitted to both LA and NY and got prime time in NY.

    Feel free to watch, any feedback would be great! This is my first pilot in awhile but I think total it's #15 in the five or so years I've been submitting.
    Oct 28, 2015 at 3:26pm
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