on Oct 28, 2015
Thank you for the feedback. We'll keep that in mind for the future. Hope you guys have a great halloween :)
Oct 29, 2015 at 3:41pm
Your show looks and sounds good and has a clear premise (so you're already ahead of most submissions). I think what you can work on is pacing up the story and fully resolving it. "To Be Continued"s are always a big bummer in pilots. No cliffhanger is worth not resolving a story in a satisfying way. So your premise is a ghost is helping a hustler hustle money and in the pilot, we see them hustle a card game. But once things go south (as things should in all stories), it just ends. A satisfying ending would maybe involve the ghost helping her outsmart this gunman dude and getting away. I dunno, just spitballing.
I hope you keep submitting!
Oct 28, 2015 at 4:57pm
Hi guys, we love Channel 101. We submitted Ghost Con. Would love your feedback? https://youtu.be/glQrnQIIp_I
Oct 28, 2015 at 2:15pm
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