Rejectee Therapy for Bored Games
Started by Chad Gray on Oct 28, 2015
  • Thanks for submitting! The performances were good. It looked good. The guy is like a blonde Stephen Root!

    The pacing was weird. It took 1:30 to get to the title and until 3:00 to get to the action.

    There wasn't a real conflict. They set out to humiliate a guy by robbing him (goals are good!) which they then do without any hiccups.

    Why were they captured by animal mask people?

    Most importantly:
    How did he have sex with that picture? Was there a hole in it, or was he rubbing his penis against the outside?

    Check out Harmon's story structure tutorials. They're pretty helpful:
    http://channel101.wikia.com/wiki/Story_Structure_101:_Super_Basic_Shit
    Oct 31, 2015 at 2:49pm
  • Chad Gray says:
    Hey folks, I submitted for this month's screening and I got rejected. It was a bummer, but I'm a first timer and I had anticipated this might happen. Here's a link to the pilot.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaZji_-wzII

    I'd love any feedback any of you have to offer on how we can secure a sweet spot in a future Channel 101 screening. Honesty, even if it's brutal, is very much appreciated.
    Oct 28, 2015 at 12:27pm
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