Rejectee Therapy for Star Wars Episode 7 Leaks, Love Dad
Started by Andre Radojcich on Oct 28, 2015
  • I enjoyed this! It's funny. I think the concept of a dad swedeing a new Star Wars movie for his kids in an attempt to explain/justify his conflict with their mom is full of potential, and there's definitely a way to explore that concept more & make it an emotional journey for him while still stuffing it with funny gags. It seems like you were more focused on the gags, but I'm sure there's a way to structure this as a satisfying story that also has a bunch of funny stuff in it. Without a strong story behind the gags it's just hard to keep paying attention.

    Also, you should consider spending more time on a consistent sound mix. I had to keep adjusting my volume while watching this, and an audience should be able to just hit "play" and sit back without doing any work on their end.

    It's funny, though! Keep making things.
    Nov 03, 2015 at 2:04am
  • That David Brown guy sells it!

    There wasn't a real conflict in this show. It's not really a narrative. It's a good character, but you gotta put him in a situation, dawg!

    You should also be aware that we're doing a "Joey and Andre Rejected Pilots" screening instead of Channel 101 next month.
    Oct 31, 2015 at 2:30pm
  • Hey everybody! Here's my and Joey Clift's submission for this month, starring the amazing David Brown: PW: R2D2

    Vimeo is playing it a little slow for some reason so I made it downloadable if that helps. Looking forward to hearing what everybody thinks!
    Oct 28, 2015 at 12:14pm
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