Rejectee Therapy for Daddy Issues
Started by Ryan Comiskey on May 28, 2015
  • I really appreciate you responding, Andre. I agree, I think characters and drama was a little flat. It's definitely weird! Thanks for complimenting it also. I think it needs a ton of work .. Thanks again!
    Feb 01, 2016 at 3:10pm
  • Hey Ryan! Just watched this. I'm not a 101 expert, just a fellow rejectee, but I can throw my two cents in. I really liked the animation style and I think that it lent to some great comedic timing. Where the pilot didn't play as well for me was that parts were less dramatic and more just the characters giving their opinions (I think this pilot would have benefited a lot from having a story), and also I had a really hard time figuring out what the world of this pilot was, it seemed like everything was really weird, which made it hard for anything to stand out enough to be funny. Just my thoughts! Hope they help!
    Sep 25, 2015 at 5:35pm
  • rejection #2 ouchee
    Aug 28, 2015 at 6:01pm
  • https://youtu.be/S0our2GnhVg

    Hey, dudes. I'd love some feedback. I definitely have my own list of things I'd like to do a lot better next time. Thanks.
    May 28, 2015 at 10:07pm
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