Rejectee Therapy for MacGuffins
Started by connie s on Oct 27, 2014
  • The main problem for me was keeping track of story. I assume your intention was having a 'MacGuffin' like quest that's really an excuse for characters to travel back in time- but it you didn't need a very complex set up if it was just a throw away device.

    It was great that you guys got creative with the premise, and it looked like you had fun making it which always shows. Keep that up.

    Next time try making something a bit more 'serialized' that starts with a format the viewer is familiar with. Then you can layer on the fun performances and jokes from there.
    Good luck and keep submitting!
    Oct 27, 2014 at 6:37pm
  • connie s says:
    any critiques or commentary would be appreciated!
    http://youtu.be/tuhjc0xIHEU
    Oct 27, 2014 at 2:11am
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